Bogsucker Posted January 16, 2004 Share Posted January 16, 2004 A little prose by Jim W.Lake of the Woods/ March Ice Fisherman’s LamentI can’t stop thinking about LOW!!! I have slipped too far in to the dream cone, though enjoying it ever so. I need to step foot onto the hard layer of water that hides beneath a yield of fish, paramount to biblical proportions! Fish with large wielding teeth, fish with thick backs and colors represented in the rainbow. I envision fish that fight and fish that are savored among a team of hard water hunters.Upon it’s frozen shelf we stand in wonderment, and crouch in a electronic daze! The feeling of societal abandonment, survival, comfort and exhilaration simultaneouslyMerge to form the revelation we have some to know as….”The March Trip”!!Camaraderie, not taking a back seat, is often lifted high above the pine, black spruce and tamaracks! Jubilation trumpets outward, far and beyond our temporary home on the ice! In climax, a true predator fish has found itself entrapped in a cylindrical nightmare!! Perilously and unwilling, the King of the ice blanketed bay, momentarily will learn how to fly!!!!Jim Wernimont Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 17, 2004 Share Posted January 17, 2004 That was beautiful man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
icewalkr1 Posted January 17, 2004 Share Posted January 17, 2004 wow if i could remember half or any of the stuff that somehow seeped in and out of my head while spending countless hours solo on the ice,while waiting for a fish to tell me what do next,i'd probley learn a thing or three.It looks like you know what your talking about,that was good stuff!keep em' coming.It makes think about why exactly we freezeourkeesters for a fish or two or three. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
icemaster Posted January 17, 2004 Share Posted January 17, 2004 wow, that was pretty deep stuff. it almost brings a tear to the eye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwkfsh Posted January 18, 2004 Share Posted January 18, 2004 Jim, that has the potential to be a great piece of prose. With a little tuning you will have a real keeper there. ie: Far I slip deep into the dream, though enjoying it ever so. I need to walk on water hard, rendered firm by frigid wind. Beneath which hides my treasured yield. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJC Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 Excellent post. I catch myself wandering about the "hardwater". We're definately a different breed, pure and true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
can it be luck? Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 Wow! And here I thought the "narcotic effect" came from the Vicodin and Oxys the doctor prescribed me for my shoulder!! (motorcycle accident) ------------------http://groups.msn.com/canitbeluck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 20, 2004 Share Posted January 20, 2004 bog and kwk..i'm not into poetry too much, although i like robert service. i liked your stuff. some guys are good with putting down in words, what's in the head and heart. i think it's a gift. later, keebo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gophish Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 although it was a hands down masterpiece, it sounds to me like you need to learn how to catch fish to keep yourself a little more busy....at least your trying, cant go wrong when on the ice!!keep it coming shakespeare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim W Posted January 22, 2004 Share Posted January 22, 2004 gophish,curious as to whom your post was directed too?Jim W Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
can it be luck? Posted January 22, 2004 Share Posted January 22, 2004 I dont think Jim needs any help catching fish, an accomplished fisherman hard or soft water....Given his coffee of course! Exercise for the mind and soul...That's all. ------------------http://groups.msn.com/canitbeluck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bogsucker Posted January 22, 2004 Author Share Posted January 22, 2004 FYI, Bogsucker is NOT Jim W.To paraphrase/plagiarise Rod Serling You're fishing in another dimension, a dimension not only of sight and sound but of mind; a journey onto a wondrous lake whose boundaries are only that of the imagination. That's the tip-up flag up ahead - your next stop, the... [This message has been edited by Bogsucker (edited 01-22-2004).][This message has been edited by Bogsucker (edited 01-22-2004).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loosegoose Posted January 22, 2004 Share Posted January 22, 2004 Only a train driver(engineer) would come up with something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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